On a night so deep you can taste it

On a night so deep you can taste it,

I read your letter, aloud.

Quietly.

Uneasily.

But I can’t make sense of the words.

As if somewhere,

between the page and my eyes,

they gave up the ghost.

Lost all meaning –

jettisoned any sense they might once have had,

on the journey to my brain.

The implausibility of your logic marooned on the way.

I hurt.

But is that you hurting me?

Or me hurting you?

Nerves stand naked and restless,

quivering outside my body,

anticipating the last line.

The final word.

Over.


2023

On a night so deep

This is an example of me crafting a poem. It’s not based on anything, but it was inspired by the writings of Graham Greene, and also improved with feedback after I read it out at a ‘New Contexts’ poetry group meeting, an international groups run by Ian Gouge, which meets online every month and from which I get lots of ideas from all the fabulous poetry that is read out.

 

PUBLISHED IN New Contexts: 6 by Cover Story Books (Ed. Ian Gouge) February 2024