On a night so deep you can taste it
On a night so deep you can taste it,
I read your letter, aloud.
Quietly.
Uneasily.
But I can’t make sense of the words.
As if somewhere,
between the page and my eyes,
they gave up the ghost.
Lost all meaning –
jettisoned any sense they might once have had,
on the journey to my brain.
The implausibility of your logic marooned on the way.
I hurt.
But is that you hurting me?
Or me hurting you?
Nerves stand naked and restless,
quivering outside my body,
anticipating the last line.
The final word.
Over.
2023

This is an example of me crafting a poem. It’s not based on anything, but it was inspired by the writings of Graham Greene, and also improved with feedback after I read it out at a ‘New Contexts’ poetry group meeting, an international groups run by Ian Gouge, which meets online every month and from which I get lots of ideas from all the fabulous poetry that is read out.
PUBLISHED IN New Contexts: 6 by Cover Story Books (Ed. Ian Gouge) February 2024